I read your poem so many times …. I feel restlessness come over me every time..
Pindos isn't big enough to hold me ….Im trapped….. so is my spirit …and tormented soul..
Respect for man…but anger and frustration in my soul… I weight the balance of my inner feelings and passions with the rest of the world… I am so powerful and yet at the same time powerless .
…….A Wolf only kills to eat…I feel this wolf kills to exerts his power from the sheer force of frustrated, anger and impatience…he wants …and what he wants ..he fears he might not get …to rule to triumph to be recognised as the majestic creature he was born to be…. he runs and he runs…and he is searching…From one corner of his world….to the next,... himself tired out …… his soul still running…This wolf is nocturnal ….and each time I read it there is more.
To sum up….
………its Beauty and the Beast…but not the fairy tale…
I love this poem…one of my favourites from you…Brilliant work Gio This poem made me feel at one with your beast..
Very nice! :) good use of Vocabulary..imagery..and a mix of rhyming schemes! :) a very enjoyable read!
Wow.. It's long but I love it. You have a unique style. I hope I see you in the Poetry Castle
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Ur poem isn't good, very poor quality.
That's pretty impressive. I saw little wolfie running among the hills, his tail on fire.
Hi Gio, I picked up some great visuals from this piece of poetry. That wolf howling in the moonlight certainly gave me the shivers.